Some people say that advertisement is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discus both views and give your opinion.

Most individuals are of the view that marketing is very useful in coercing the audience in patronizing

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particular goods and services, while others are of

opposing

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the opposing

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view. In

this

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will be discussing both sides and

also

giving reasons

while

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why

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the latter opinion is

best

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the best

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in

business

.

To begin

, advertising is the process of creating awareness to the public on a particular product, and

this

style of

business

is now used by all organizations and platforms and as

such

has made many people

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be of

the

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believe

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that it is no longer as effective as it ought to be.

Firstly

, those who are of

this

fate argue that as humans we tend to

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loose

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lose

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interest in

adverts

that are too common in our daily life.

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, the Nigeria Idol show has so many

adverts

on

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the break hour and as

such

viewers tend not to pay attention to

this

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adverts

because they have been too common thereby resulting

to

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it being irritating and loss of interest in the commodity.

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, broadcast that

are

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being televised too often tends to annoy viewers. A case scenario

,

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is the who wants to be a millionaire show,

that is

premiered every Sunday and has 70

percent

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of showtime being filled with

adverts

,

this

occurrence

which

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has gotten many fans

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negative reviews on the program and

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the products useless as it will not in

anyway

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persuade them to purchase the item.

However

, irrespective of

this

perception some people are of

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believe

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that

this

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business

broadcasting

measures

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goes

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a long way in convincing the audience to patronize the said product and I'm of the opinion that

this

perception is reliable and a fact to put into consideration because many

if

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of

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the items we use recently

are

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introduced to us by different means of advertisement.

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, the Nigerian big brother show

,

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has promoted the lush hair brand that recorded a tremendous sale

last

year following their consistent show-casing on the program.

Furthermore

,

this

pattern of entrepreneurship has made so many

enterprise

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to

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have partners which

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brought about

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expansion. In conclusion, advertisement has brought about various reactions as most people find it

being

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very useful, others say it is a waste of time as it makes the public angry. I personally see it as an innovative form of commodity awareness and as

such

recommend organizations to make relatable

adverts

that viewers can relate with.