Your friend is involved in an import/export business. You have some ideas that might be helpful. Write to him/her and say – Suggest a product and explain what is good about it. – Tell him/her about the product in your country. – Advise what he/she should do with this product.

Dear Harsh, I hope these letters find you in radiant health, I recently get to know that you have just commenced your new business. I m writing
this
letter in order to suggest a few products from my country which you can consider under your import export profession. To embark on, there are some vegetables and fruits which are in high demand in export world. Though, it is very easily available in India and cultivated on large scale.
Firstly
, pomegranate cost very cheap in my home country whereas high in demand in the United Arab Emirates, it only cost 12 lakhs per container.
Secondly
, okra and Pusa jwala pepper are
also
easily available in the Indian market and are estimated to cost between 10-13 lakhs. These are easy to transport around the world as they do not need a very high temperature due to their thick skin.
Therefore
, it is my suggestion that
this
kind of unit can boost your business and I can help you by introducing the farmers as I know some of them by that you can give an exposure with different kinds of elements. Apart from it, I can
also
assist buyers from the United Kingdom and from the United Arab Emirates. As I know you still don't have linkages in these countries, it may open some more good opportunities for your firm. Let me know if you need any other
further
information. I wish you all success in your endeavours. Best wishes, Vanden Patel.
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