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Today technology and robots replace people in many areas. Why do you think this is a case? Is it a positive or negative development?

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there is no doubt that these days
technology
 get better day after day ,especially at
this
 time, so, some folks would like to get help from robots, while others believe it has to be in the human ring.
This
 essay will discuss both sides and will draw me personal conclusion. On one hand, the person who prefers to have more
technology
 in
life
such
 as a robot
,
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 has many positive things.
For example
, if you have a market you can just build a robot to work in the shop opposite hire people and pay a salary every month,
Although
, if someone wants to have a ticket for a movie he just can buy it on the phone which is a great thing in my opinion,
however
, the cost of
technology
 is so high and it should take a time to use to it.
On the other hand
, other people would not trust
this
technology
 ,especially old ones, because there is no
technology
 in his
life
also
 he would trust a human to help than
technology
,
although
 there are many folks to help themself without any help of
technology
 like some will choose to save money in the home
instead
 bank account,
however
, I believe it is a choice for using any
technology
 in the personal
life
. In conclusion, after a careful analysis of both points of view, I believe that having
technology
 in our
life
 seems to be the optimum choice compared to not using any in
life
 for several reasons I write it,
although
, the positives are more than negatives of
technology
.
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