You have been working in a company for the last two years. Recently, your computer in the office has started giving some problems and it is affecting your work performance. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, describe the problem explain how it is affecting your work write what you want him to do regarding it Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to bring your attention in regard to a laptop which is provided by your company to me. But
this
time, it is creating a hindrance in my work. I am facing a problem regarding its battery backup as every time I have to keep it on the charging spot .
Additionally
, there are so many times whenever it comes to saving my important data, that automatically it gets shut down.
As a result
, I always go into dilemma
due to
the deadline of my project work. Day by day ,
this
is making me so annoyed. I am making my humble request to replace it with a new one because it has some technical issue which can not be solved as the maintenance team told me that it would not be able to work .I hope you will understand my terms . Yours faithfully, Liza.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Technical difficulties
  • Productivity
  • Deadlines
  • Software glitches
  • Upgrading
  • Hardware malfunction
  • Work disruption
  • Commitment
  • Swift action
  • Consulting
  • Thorough checkup
  • Resolving
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