Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative trend?

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Nowadays, it is becoming increasingly common that more people are likely to decide to have offspring later in their life.
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trend has caused some controversial opinions, in my opinion, I believe
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tendency may give both effects for some reasons. The
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reason why I believe that many have decided to born a baby later is that they want to have time to focus on their career and their ideal.
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means, if you in a young
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from 20 to 40, the
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you have much enthusiasm for working, and you have a baby. Those things would distract your work because you have to set and balance between work and family, and the working date will be cut shorter than before.
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, if you have children early brings many many negative effects if you don’t have a stable source of income you have to pay for taxes, insurance, many bills and money to take care of your heir.
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, my mom she has pregnant at 30, a youth
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in her career and when she was born, she thought she would take care a few weeks and after ,that she can back to her work. Unfortunately, I am a weak child, so at that moment make she change her plan and decided to stay at home to take care of me as I have grown up. So deciding to have a baby late is
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a great way. Another, reason why I believe
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tendency is detrimental is that many people in middle
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pregnant have many dangerous matters. According to many researchers
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that women who are born children in middle
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that the babies usually suffer from diseases
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as stupid and retarted.
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, the rate of born and death of social is inequity. To conclude, I opine that matter in having children in middle life is beneficial due to the fact that they have more time for themselves and for their working ideal.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prioritization
  • financial stability
  • educational prospects
  • personal development
  • health advancements
  • fertility options
  • economic uncertainties
  • parenthood
  • societal norms
  • life experience
  • generational gap
  • upbringing
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