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Some think increasing business and cultural contact between nations is positive. Others think it leads to the disappearance of the national identity. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

#think #business #contact #nations #disappearance #identity
It is true that ever since
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industrialization, economists,
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 and scholars believe that
this
 phenomenon has had
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 influence on countries’ markets and cultural exchanges. I believe that it brought about both positive and negative
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 on
people
’s lives. On the one hand, it is
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 that during the past centuries by industrialization and more recently by
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 of the Internet,
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global business and communication have been substantially changed. They have affected the mass production of merchants, easy shipment and reliable and fast communication among producers and consumers. Without these technologies, it would not be viable for nations to flourish their intra and between trades.
Furthermore
,
people
 are much more knowledgeable about other individuals’
cultures
, histories and costumes than ever before. We are constantly bombarded by media about other countries’ news,
people
, and lifestyles which
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 not available in the past.
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 the other hand, some argue that
this
 would harm the
cultures
 and industry of the local
people
. While the chipper products are available for
people
 around the
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, some retailers and small businesses would lose their job because of the competitive market which in turn affects the local products and take away the identity of those potential goods.
In addition
,
the
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global communications have caused some
cultures
, languages and nations’ characteristics be faded. These days most
people
 speak
in
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some minor languages
such
 as English, Spanish,
French
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 while other less spoken languages spoken by small groups of
people
 are invaded which is an indicator that how cultural identity is being ruined by the global trend in communication. In my opinion,
although
 these mankind innovations have made peoples’ lives much easier
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 can have detrimental effects on
identity
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, culture and discriminative properties of nations. In summary, it is undeniable the positive impact of ever-increasing of business and culture on nations, I believe that along with
this
 great impact, we will suffer from deteriorating local
cultures
 and other economic loss.
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