Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

These days advertising is to be found everywhere. We see it in from of huge posters on walls, moving images on screens in city centres or through speeches on the radio all over the world. They have proven themself successful but ,

still

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it appears, that we are already so used to them that we

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do not pay

attention

to them anymore.

This

essay will discuss both views and provide a personal conclusion. Starting by looking at the fact, that advertising has proven itself successful, it is surely a great way to gain customers. A good and new advert is not only an interesting eye-catcher for viewers but

also

an absolute necessity for new companies. Take a startup

for example

. If they wouldn't invest in

adverts

, and

therefore

spread their product and visibility, to wouldn't gain any customers as nobody would know them. As a matter of fact, for

such

businesses advertisement is the only way for us to get to know them.

On the other hand

is it true that

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we costumers are already so used to all these

adverts

on the street that we do not pay

attention

to them anymore.

This

especially goes for our routine outgoings

such

as the daily way to work or school. Hardly anyone will stop and stare at an advert and say ‚oh yes,

this

is exactly what I was looking for.

This

is due to the fact, that most

adverts

are very repetitive in idea and message and from the same or similar companies. To sum up, advertising is indeed a very important tool for our economy and it is especially useful for small companies and start-ups.

However

, is our society these days so used to these

adverts

that many do not pay

attention

anymore due to their repetitive and similar content. I believe if an advertising campaign would demonstrate new or provocative Ideas more often people would pay more

attention

.