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Some people think that to be successful, you need to get a university education, whereas others say it is not true. Discuss both ideas and give your own opinion.

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It is often believed that someone established in life is a person that holds some kind of higher education
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, a lot of people think that a college
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 is not necessary to be somewhat
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successful
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successful
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 state that having a diploma is not the only route the lead a victorious life. Nowadays, obtaining a college
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 of the safest ways to ensure someone's bright future. In fact, in today's society, knowledge is considered
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the greatest tool to climb the social ladder. Let's take doctors
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 example, they are often viewed as very fortunate.
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 it is mainly possible thanks to
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their medical
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, experience and autodidactic learning can
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powerful
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 when it comes to succeeding.
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 contrast, a lot of doctors in the past did not go through any type of higher education but were still highly looked upon. Bill gates
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one
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 proof of
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 of the richest man
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 the globe even though he never completed his academic certification. Gate's invention changed forever the modern world and is a living
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illustration
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 that no
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 needs a postgraduate status to live a prosperous life. As far as I am consider, I do not think going to University is the main key to
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 success. I believe that anyone who is willing to learn a subject can do so without applying to an advanced school. I personally think that experience
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 the field can teach better than any type of program and with great experience comes amazing results. To conclude, having an academic
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 can be a must in order to
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successfully
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 work in
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 field but it is not always necessary.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • university education
  • higher pay
  • sweated and sacrificed
  • higher education
  • time, effort, and financial investment
  • specialized knowledge and skills
  • job prospects
  • economic contributions
  • valuable contributions
  • fairness and equality
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