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Nowadays people tend to live up to 150 years old, what’s the reason and implication to the society

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Recently we find that folks get to live up to age 150 unlike what was obtainable previously. One of the reasons why
this
 is happening is because of the outstanding advancement in medical science and technology.
This
 has
consequently
 led to a plethora of benefits to
the
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society some of which will be discussed in the following paragraphs. Daily, scientists continue to carry out
researches
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 on health procedures and diets that can enhance
ones
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 wellbeing and reduce the occurrence of sickness. By adopting these solutions, people are able to stay strong and live for
longer
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 years. An example is the introduction of stem cells which can reverse the fatal effects of many illnesses, as well as anti-ageing products and keto diets. Another reason will be the manufacture of modern gym equipment. Unlike before, now exercises can be done indoors and consistency can easily be maintained. Yes, it may be true that some of these steps are invasive, but the end will always justify the means. The implication of prolonged existence can be seen in these two aspects. The
first
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 that family and friends can now spend longer times together. I will never forget how I felt when I travelled to the village to see my great
grand-mother
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. The
second
 effect it has on
the
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society is the preservation of history and transfer of culture. As no one can tell history better than those who lived in it. To conclude,
although
 it may be tasking to care for old people,
but
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having them around to share their
experience
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 with you is priceless.
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