Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Technology has a greater impact on films. Some believe that today's
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see
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on their mobile phones, tablets and many more devices, while others say that they fully entertain in
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they watch
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on their phones because it is cheaper than
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, I believe that
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give us valuable
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. On the one hand, watching various films on tablets at cheaper
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is because
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carry their devices anywhere so, they can watch
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at any time as well as
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ticket
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increased and
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can't afford them because of lower capita income.
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, amazon prime company and many movie companies
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as Netflix, max player and many more provide 10,000
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on 999 rupees per year,
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, provide ads-free music so everyone watches
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at home at lower
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essay would argue that watching a movie at own home does not provide a very good
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,
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provide a unique and never forget
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means that their quality of sound like doubly, 5.1 and many more,
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to, the big screen as well as audience reaction on the hero's entries and fighting.
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, An article published by Indian
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showed that around 90 per cent of south Indian
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preferred watching
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in
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,
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provide never the forgettable valuable lesson. In conclusion,
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seeing films on laptops because of its lower
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, I think
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will provide a good
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, and is a better option.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Convenience
  • Mobile Viewing
  • Cost-efficient
  • Time-efficient
  • Personalized experience
  • Immersive
  • Cinematic experience
  • Surround sound
  • Collective experience
  • Technical superiority
  • Sensory experience
  • Social hubs
  • Cultural events
  • Distractions
  • Preservation
  • Filmmaking art
  • Cinematographic nuances
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