The share of young and old persons has an irrefutable role in society. These days, the
of some countries belongs to young
. I believe that since the younger group is braver and stronger, the advantages outweigh its disadvantages.
On the one hand, the young-adult
is one of the important parameters for development.
In other words
due to their body conditions have more energy and ability for doing any activities rather than older
. To give a clear example, in a factory which needs body activities, young individuals do effectively, and the rate of production will rise, so the country will be developed.
, the young
are braver rather the older individuals, the young adults due to their ages are braver rather the old
, so the military would become stronger and act effectively, and no countries can attack them.
On the other hand
, if the number of older
was more than young adults, the government would have to spend a lot of money.
, the young
need more public facilities,
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, clubs, and recreations rather oldest ones, so the government have to allocate enough money and time to satisfy them.
, the older individuals have more experience rather the youngest ones.
, in each career,
who did that for many years, absolutely are more skilled, which the young part of the
does not have .
having the younger
has some disadvantages (more costly and do not have enough skills), its advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Because, the young
that they are braver and more efficient, are more useful for countries.