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Nowadays anyone can post news on the internet. As a result, we cannot trust information we read there. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Information
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 on the
internet
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 cannot be trusted because it is accessible for anyone to post
news
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 there. I completely agree with
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 notion because there is no reliability checking before posting
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 and many people do not like to read a long boring paper even though it is dependable.
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 with, in order to post any opinion or
news
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 on the digital network, there is no special verification to prove whether the source is credible or not. Owing to
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 case, reading unreliable
news
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 becomes easy and common on the
internet
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.
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, some viral opinions through threads on the Twitter application are commonly quoted by local
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 for reaching a high engagement, even though their users are usually not trustworthy journalists.
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, the person behind the
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 on the
internet
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 could be a random teenager,
housewife
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, or some elderly person.
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, nowadays, content on social
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 is more interesting than a reliable newspaper online. As e-newspaper usually offers a long trustful journal that makes readers bored, people prefer to take
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 from random short videos with colorful animation on social
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. Take the TikTok application
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, it is a common practice for Indonesian GenZ to look for some
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 from
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 application
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 of a boring scientific webpage. In conclusion, as there is no credibility verification before anyone posts
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 on the
internet
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,
thus
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,
news
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 spread on the
internet
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 cannot be trusted. Even though the
news
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 on social
media
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 is easily understandable and features interesting animations, it is better to read a long journal to gain reliable data.

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coherence cohesion
Try to include some transitional phrases to further enhance the logical flow between paragraphs.
task achievement
Although your arguments are clear, try to expand each idea with an additional supporting sentence for depth.
task achievement
The essay clearly addresses the task with a comprehensive response, providing clear arguments.
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Excellent use of examples, such as the reference to Twitter and TikTok, to support main points.
coherence cohesion
Logical structure is maintained throughout the essay with a clear introduction and conclusion.
coherence cohesion
Main points are supported effectively with relevant examples.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Credibility
  • Verification
  • Misinformation
  • Disinformation
  • Journalistic standards
  • Algorithm
  • Engagement
  • Source discernment
  • Anonymity
  • Traditional news outlets
  • AI and machine learning
  • Reliable sources
  • Unverified information
  • Amplification
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