Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. What are the causes of it and state some solutions and your opinion.

Due to industrialisation and modernisation,

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of living of the

people

is rising day by day. For the time being, most of the

people

(the wide range of

people

) in big

cities

are living

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a very

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low quality

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life. There are many reasons for

this

and

also

appropriate measures can be taken to improve it (

also

some various way will be served to the problems.) . In my opinion, rising population, Westernisation and environmental pollution are the major issues for

this

type of life. Undoubtedly,

people

get almost all the facilities, when they live in bigger

cities

rather than in smaller

cities

. Everyone wants to live a comfortable and luxurious lifestyle, so they migrate to urban areas.

As a result

, a number of individuals are found in

cities

and to accommodate them, trees are cut to build houses and colonies. Less green space can cause air as well as water pollution. These pollutants when

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in the atmosphere

,

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results in various respiratory and lung diseases.

Such

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of diseases if remain

among

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in

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the community, they may cause

unhealthy

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an unhealthy

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generation.

However

, to cure

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pollution problem, more trees should be planted in populated areas. It purifies the air as well as water. Trees are the lungs of nature. Environmental friendly strategies should be followed while building houses. Every colony must have one park and lawn to maintain

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a green

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environment. In my view,

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cars should be used by

people

and more

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should be done on public transportation, which saves our surroundings from harmful gases. Awareness programmes should be organised to spread awareness among the

people

about saving our environment. To conclude, everyone should take care of the environment to live a good quality

life

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of life

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and should take care of everything that

it

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should not be detrimental to the health of the

people

of the community.