Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. What are the causes of it and state some solutions and your opinion.
The noun phrase standard seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The noun phrase very low quality life seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It appears that low quality is missing a hyphen. Consider adding the hyphen(s).
The verb retain may be in the wrong form after the subordinating conjunction when. Consider changing it to the gerund form.
The comma may be separating the subject and verb in your sentence. Consider removing it.
It seems that kind may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that there is an article usage problem here.
It seems that there is an article usage problem here.
The noun phrase green environment seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It appears that the quantifier less does not fit with the countable noun cars. Consider changing the quantifier or the noun.
The word stressed doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.
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- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
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