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Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. What are the causes of it and state some solutions and your opinion.

#quality #life #cities
Due to industrialisation and modernisation,
standard
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the standard
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 of living of the
people
 is rising day by day. For the time being, most of the
people
 (the wide range of
people
) in big
cities
 are living
very
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low quality
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 life. There are many reasons for
this
 and
also
 appropriate measures can be taken to improve it (
also
 some various way will be served to the problems.) . In my opinion, rising population, Westernisation and environmental pollution are the major issues for
this
 type of life. Undoubtedly,
people
 get almost all the facilities, when they live in bigger
cities
 rather than in smaller
cities
. Everyone wants to live a comfortable and luxurious lifestyle, so they migrate to urban areas.
As a result
 , a number of individuals are found in
cities
 and to accommodate them, trees are cut to build houses and colonies. Less green space can cause air as well as water pollution. These pollutants when
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 in the atmosphere
,
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 results in various respiratory and lung diseases.
Such
kind
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 of diseases if remain
among
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 the community, they may cause
unhealthy
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 generation.
However
 , to cure
a
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 pollution problem, more trees should be planted in populated areas. It purifies the air as well as water. Trees are the lungs of nature. Environmental friendly strategies should be followed while building houses. Every colony must have one park and lawn to maintain
green
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 environment. In my view,
less
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 cars should be used by
people
 and more
stressed
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 should be done on public transportation, which saves our surroundings from harmful gases. Awareness programmes should be organised to spread awareness among the
people
 about saving our environment. To conclude, everyone should take care of the environment to live a good quality
life
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 and should take care of everything that
it
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should not be detrimental to the health of the
people
 of the community.
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