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Nowadays many mothers take care of the family and don't go out to work. Some people believe they should be given salaries by the government. Do you agree or disagree?

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Presently, most
mothers
 decide to take care of their family and do not go out for working.
However
, there are some people who believe that they should receive salaries from the
government
. In my perspective, I believe that giving salaries to many
mothers
 is unacceptable. In
this
 essay, I will provide my view on why I strongly disagree that most
mothers
 should gain salaries while they take care of house chores.
Firstly
, if many
mothers
 receive earnings from the
government
, the states must spend so much budget on treating them.
As a result
, the budget of the states may be in deficit from spending so much money on taking care of them.
Secondly
, the states do not get any benefits from helping those
mothers
 because they do not provide any advantages and profits return to the
country
.
Thirdly
, the
government
 must bear the cost of their lives not only for money but
also
 for social security benefits to them.
Lastly
, the more
mothers
 choose to do house chores, the worse situation that
government
 has to confront.
In other words
, the state has to face the worst situation if many
mothers
 decide to do housework because the state does not get any taxes from them.
For example
, if people make a decision to do more housework
instead
 of doing other jobs, the GDP of the
country
 will decrease and cause many troubles for the
country
,
such
 as the lack of workers and not receiving any privileges of loaning budgets from other countries. In conclusion, according to the above, I deeply disagree with the policy that the
government
 should give the salary to the mother who decides to do chores because
this
 policy will provide many drawbacks to the
country
instead
 of helping the
country
 better.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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