A colleague gave you a book which you used for your presentation. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter, you should say: what the presentation was about, why the presentation was important how the book helped you.

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Dear Abigail, I hope

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letter finds you well. I am writing to you to thank you for the book you let me borrow

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week. As you already know, I urgently needed “Tales of Wonderland” for my online presentation that I had to do for work. My lecture was about fantasy themes in literature, and you know how excited I get once I hear that theme being brought up.

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speech was important to me mainly because I had the opportunity to encourage educators to include fantasy books in the kindergarten curriculum,

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, being more open-minded.

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, I think kids tend to be more creative after they read about

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kind of thing.

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, your book was of great help and it served as a strong example for the topic of my presentation.

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, I even had some teachers asking me for multiple copies

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so that they could study it more and, hopefully, add it to their schedule. Thank you so much for making

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easier for me.

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reason, I would love to treat you with a meal someday. Sincerely, Anne.

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coherence cohesion

The letter is very well-structured, and the ideas flow logically from one to the other. However, adding a bit more detail about how the book specifically helped in the presentation could improve clarity.

task achievement

The letter accomplishes its task effectively and responds completely to all points required in the prompt. To further enhance it, you could provide a bit more context about the presentation or its outcome.

suitable writing tone

The tone is just right—kind and grateful, fitting well for a letter to a colleague.

logical structure

The letter has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion, making it easy to follow.

single idea per paragraph

Each paragraph focuses on a single idea, which makes the letter cohesive and easy to read.

greeting and closing

The greeting and closing are appropriate, adding to the overall polite and formal tone of the letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

186 words

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A colleague gave you a book which you used for your presentation. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter, you should say: what the presentation was about, why the presentation was important how the book helped you.

All parents want the best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that school teaches children a skill but others think having a range of subjects is better for the children's future. Discuss both sides.

Some school children buy healthy food from the school cafeteria. However, some buy unhealthy food. What are the reasons for both these situations? Should schools be allowed to sell unhealthy food?

some people said professionals such as doctors or engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training while other said they should be free to work in another country

make the content better by using advance grammer to get 6.5 INitls

A lot of money is spent nowadays searching for oil. As the world's oil resources will eventually run out, it would be more logical to spend some of this money on developing new sources of power, such as wind and solar. To what extent do you agree or disagree?