It is predicted that robots are going to become increasingly important in our lives. How could robots be used in the future? Will this development be a positive or a negative development?

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that androids taking more and more space in
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fabrics and medicine.
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this
vogue is obviously welcome to become a development.
First
of all,
robots
do not tumble tiring or empathy, they will be executing everything despite the status or type of employment. In some
cases
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people can often shape issues
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could provide the
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, whereas cyborgs cannot create mistakes in any segment.
Thus
,
robots
will be replacing hospitals’ personnel
such
as surgeons , therapeutics,
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similarly
they will be unique in physical posts like builders or
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, our lives are depending
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webs
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, because about 90 per cent of them consist of virtual runners ,which
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us to determine our wishes
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web sites
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. In some other cases,
this
new phenomenon has an enormous positive
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on society. Generally,
robots
are
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completely obey
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humanity
,
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and achieve any dangerous work in each industry.
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, artificial intelligence is
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device ,which means that
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could do any calculations or predictions
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possible future. It can be clearly seen that
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space development is absolutely
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of
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, which is being done researching
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Mars or the Moon. Alternatively, our
last
cosmic-telescope “James Web” is flying through the stars and sending photos or data from them. To sum up,
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of
robots
is infinite ,especially in our future .They could supply us in various sectors including
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factories
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, medical and many others.
Likewise
,
this
process is already unstoppable and uncontrolled.
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