Sport can be used to bring people from different cultures together. It helps to foster friendliness between nations, especially when sport-based tournaments or competitions are held. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Most
people
find sports
events interesting and it has an advantage in uniting people
from other diversity together. This
essay,
will elaborate on how Remove the comma
apply
sports
can unite people
with different cultures more
especially during sport-based Correct quantifier usage
apply
tournament
or Fix the agreement mistake
tournaments
competition
. I must say I totally agree Fix the agreement mistake
competitions
to
the above statement.
Change preposition
with
Firstly
, sports
event is a great avenue for physical fitness and general mental health. This
helps to strengthens
patriotism amongst Wrong verb form
strengthen
countries
For example
, during football
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a football
competition
between two Fix the agreement mistake
competitions
countries
like England and Germany lots of people
from different diversities gather together to have a view of the show. In
respect to Change preposition
With
this
foreigners are made comfortable in different ways by providing their
needs especially when it comes to food, Change preposition
for their
different
intercontinental cuisine are prepared.
Correct word choice
and different
Secondly
, This
also
generate
fund for the government which can Change the verb form
generates
be use
to develop different infrastructures within localities. Change the verb form
be used
People
travel far and wide in other to participate in different
Add an article
a different
sports
tournament
and as well explore Fix the agreement mistake
tournaments
to
new Change preposition
apply
environment
and cultures, make new friends , Fix the agreement mistake
environments
learn
new things outside their doorstep. It encourages youngsters Correct word choice
and learn
the
importance of Change preposition
to the
sports
in life regardless of culture and race. Again, sport
competitions Change the noun form
sports
such
as football, basketball, volleyball, and weight- lifting
Correct your spelling
weight-lifting
makes
one Change the verb form
make
to
know Change the verb form
apply
there
capacity and how to improve in different aspect of life. Replace the word
their
Sports
tournament
encourages various countries
on the of development , the need to adapt to new
environment , Add an article
a new
the new
communicate
with Correct word choice
and communicate
people
with
common English language without feeling isolated or having Change preposition
in
inferiority
complex .
In summary, Add an article
an inferiority
sports
tournament
is pivotal in development
and exposure to new things amongst Correct article usage
the development
countries
, strengthen
friendship and as well generate fund for them.Wrong verb form
strengthening
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite