You recently stayed at a hotel and you had a great time. Write a letter to the hotel. In your letter thank the manager and his staff give some particular examples of why you enjoyed your stay at the hotel so much explain that you have written a review of the hotel on a popular website for tourists

Dear Sir or Madam, I have recently spent my holiday with my parents in your Taj

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and I am

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writing to express one of the most wonderful experiences we had in our life during our stay. First of all, I would definitely appreciate the effort you and your team made to make us feel welcome. My family and I are so thankful to your staff for being so kind and friendly.

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, the best experience belongs to the Famous restaurant of your

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which was unforgettable

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its service and food. My parents and I were pleasantly surprised when we found out that

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restaurant serves all the different dishes around the world. We tried three different cuisines during our stay and all were delicious. My family and I loved the food and fast service of your restaurant. All in all, we enjoyed our stay very much so

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we decided to write a positive 5-star review on Google Maps, which is an extremely popular website among visitors as they prefer to check the ratings of their

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on that website. Again, thank you and we will surely plan to stay at your

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in the future. Yours faithfully, Ketul Shah

ketulshah2825

Jul 2, 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Make sure each paragraph focuses on one main idea, but overall your letter is clear.

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You provided specific reasons for your enjoyment, which strengthens your letter.

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Your tone is very polite and warm, which is great for this kind of letter.

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You used good examples to explain why you enjoyed your stay, such as the food and service.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

204 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

expressing gratitude
exceptional service
hospitality
cleanliness
quality of food
attentiveness
memorable experiences
organized tours
unique facilities
positive review
tourist website
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