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Now-a-days many people choose to be self-employed, rather than work for a company. What could be the advantages and disadvantages of being self-employed?

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Currently, most
people
prefering
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preferring
 for self-
employement
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employment
, rather than working at an organization. Self-employed
people
 are mostly self-learners, they always want to achieve their goals.
People
also
 choose to be an employee in an organization. In
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both sides of being self-employed. Regarding the advantages, Entrepreneurs are
invovled
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involved
 in self-
employement
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employment
. These
people
 prefer the
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business
bussiness
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business
 field mostly. One of the most significant benefits of being self-employed is freedom.
This
 self-
employement
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employment
 leads to more productivity and satisfaction. Self-employed
people
 are good decision-makers. They will not have any particular timings to do
work
, when they are fascinated will complete their
work
.
For example
, self-employed
people
 will not start their
work
 8'oclock, they will create their comfort zone to do
work
. In terms of feasible negative outcomes, some
people
 think it is
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 to be self-employed, so most
people
 prefer to be an employee in an organization. Mostly,
people
 may not get monthly profits. And self-employed
people
 may not get pensions, annual leave, etc. To conclude, it is better to be self-employed when they have tremendous technical skills like
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entrepreneur
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.
Thus
, entrepreneurs should consider both benefits and risks before
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setting up
settingup
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setting up
 a
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business
bussiness
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business
.
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