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What are the benefits of space research or space travel?

#space #research #travel
In the present world, every
country
 participating in
space
research
. It has so many advantages as well as disadvantages. Some of these will be discussed in the below paragraphs.
Firstly
,
space
research
 is important to every
country
. In
space
research
, we can find a lot of information, like weather conditions, soil, water levels in
space
 and whether it is useful for human lives or not. If we can do
research
 on these, it will be very useful for humans.Because In the world population is increasing day by day, and natural resources are decreasing on the earth, So It is tough to live on the earth.
For instance
, take some countries
such
 as China,India etc., we compare those countries, the population is growing rapidly. If it continues in the future, it may be a big problem for human lifestyle, because we cannot provide natural resources, and we may not have the earth for a living. In
this
 situation, we can see
space
 is an alternative to living. It is the main advantage for humans.
In addition
,
space
research
 has a few disadvantages like it is too much cost for the
research
 and build the spacecraft. Even though, If the
research
 is successful money is not a concern, but we cannot say always successful, because it depends on various conditions like bad weather,technical issues in spacecraft, etc. In conclusion,
space
research
 is important to every
country
 and it has so many benefits for humans. At the same time if the
research
 fails we can lose so much money.
Space
research
 is a big achievement for every
country
.
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