Some people think that Government should take measures to improve the health of its citizens. Others think it must be managed by individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is now debatable whether authorised
people
should attend to their public health
or it is solely responsible
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to
each individual. In Change preposition
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essay, the consequences of both perspectives will be clarified as well as my own ideas.
Seemingly, there are two reasons why it is wise to say that the responsibility for public health
goes to the government
. Firstly
, today's working hours are extremely unpleasant to hear. This
implies that citizens do not have much spare time to do something beneficial to their health
. Obviously, this
problem cannot be tackled by anyone apart from the government
. For instance
, adding a
new legislation concerning working hours to the existing working policies might be of significant help to Remove the article
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public because mere citizens cannot make it happen. Change the word
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Secondly
, some people
are apathetic about their health
while others are tempted only by prizes and acknowledgement rather than the benefits gained from being healthy. To encourage such
kinds of people
, only the government
has the power to hold regular activities and competitions with enticing rewards.
On the other hand
, although
the country's authorised people
do a lot of costly projects and measures,
if the citizens neither obey the regulations nor feel enthusiastic, there is nothing we can do for them. Remove the comma
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In other words
, it is ultimately contingent upon individuals as the saying suggests, "Nobody can change us unless we have a willing mind". Another striking factor is that relying too much on others is not always an option. For example
, many countries nowadays are democratic nations which means the government
cannot intervene that much with
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people
's lives. They can only encourage the public to certain
extent to take care of themselves and nothing more. In Add an article
a certain
such
cases, we cannot do anything but try to have control over our minds to avoid unhealthy living styles or not to
eat unhealthy food. Hopefully, Fix the infinitive
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this
manner may enhance our self-commitment ability.
In conclusion, I would argue that people
should not always place the blame on the government
for their discomfort. Instead
, they must try to depend only on themselves and accept their own fates.Submitted by tr.zarwaihnin on
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