The charts below show the favourite takeaways of people in Canada and the number of Indian restaurants in Canada between 1960 and 2015

The charts below show the favourite takeaways of people in Canada and the number of Indian restaurants in Canada between 1960 and 2015
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The pie chart depicts people's most favoured takeaways in
Canada
while
the bar chart illustrates the number of
Indian
restaurants
in the same country between 1960 and 2015.
Overall
, the largest proportion of Canadians prefers a Chinese takeaway, followed by
Indian
which is
also
significantly popular. Followed by
Canada
's least favourite options; Greek, Mexican, Japanese, Thai and others. There is a generally positive trend in the number of
Indian
restaurants
over the period. More specifically, with over a
third
of Canadians opting for Chinese food,
this
is definitely the favoured option. Closely followed by
Indian
takeaways, which over one-quarter of the population preferred.
On the other hand
,
Canada
's
least rated
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options included Greek, Japanese and Mexican, all earning only 1% of the country's vote.
Moreover
, with
regards
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to the growth of
Indian
restaurants
in
Canada
, there is an increasing trend. starting with more rapid growth in the 1990s, from 200 in 1960 to approximately 5000 by 1990. Here is shown the largest spike in an expansion of establishments, where the value jumps to just under 8000 by 1997.
After
this
, only around 1200 more
restaurants
are built by 2015.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words canada, indian, restaurants with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • charts
  • favourite takeaways
  • people in Canada
  • number of Indian restaurants
  • 1960
  • 2015
  • types of takeaways
  • popular
  • 55 years
  • country
  • time frame
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