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Some believe technology has made our lives too complex and the solution is to lead a simpler life without technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, there is a challenging discussion about the function of
technology
 in the community ,one group believes
technology
 has been responsible for complicated lifestyles,so, it must remove from life ,
however
,I disagree with
this
 statement that automation must vanish ,so ,I am going to discuss
this
 viewpoint to reach a direct solution. In a beginning ,some people opine that development of machinery has
been
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made many problems for people and for their opinion they have been exampled for getting a job , they have to learn the
last
 version of computer programs
such
 as Excel ,Word ,and SPSS ,while, in the past , all activities had done by human's brain ,
in addition
 of , smartphones and artificial intelligence has been widely spreading in daily activities ,
for example
, when costumers will go to a restaurant they must use QR codes to observe the menu ,so, all of
this
 has been
complicated
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 process to drink a coffee.
However
, machinery innovations have
been
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created many convenient methods for the community
such
 as
,
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present transportation system are providing short journeys in long distances and
this
 progress is depended on the newest
tchnology
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technology
 equipment,
furthermore
, laptops and computers in remote schools are available to local students ,so, they can access great classes by simply pushing their fingers on their laptops. In conclusion, the elimination of
technology
 will stop the development of society in many directions
such
 as education and transportation and it means individuals have to spend the rest of the day on primary activities
such
 as drawing a table for accounting
instead
 of usage from computer programs or many hours will waste on the roads to reach destinations ,so , I disagreed with the removal
technology
 ,it seems
that is
 a deviation from right thinking .
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