A friend has agreed to look after your house and child while you go out drinking. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Give contact details for when you are away. Give instructions on how to take care of your child. Describe other household duties.

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Dear Ravi, I hope

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letter finds you well. As discussed yesterday's call I am going out for a sleepover party tonight and I would like to give my contact information along with the emergency number as well . I am sure that I will answer your call immediately despite the noise and party mood at my friend's house. As you know, my kid is always hilarious and makes others feel happy.

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, you just need to spend time with him including playing some board games.

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, you may feel mesmerized by looking at his toys,

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he just needs help to put them in order to play with them.

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but not the least, please do not switch off the lights as he may be terrified due to darkness. I know , you may be tired with your office work,

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, I would request you to help my kid to do a bath and

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do not forget to keep his night dress in the bathroom. I would appreciate it if you could take care of my gardening work along with my pet too. I look forward to seeing you at my place before 6pm today as I need to be there at 7pm. Best regards, Lakshmi.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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