Success is often measured by wealth and material possessions. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a successful person

Money
is required by everyone for all their
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activities.It is thought by some
people
that
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wealthy and materialistic belongings is the key to
success
in life.I strongly disagree with
this
opinion.
This
essay will show that other ways can lead
one
person to a peaceful and successful
one
.I will explore
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the topic of
success
in these mentioned below paragraphs.
To begin
with,
money
can drive
as
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a factor to achieve all three basic needs of a person
such
as food,clothing and shelter.
Therefore
,many
people
start measuring
success
with wealth.
This
is actually wrong.
Although
money
can make everything
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you want,it can't buy some personal things like happiness,healthy life,real friendship and personal gook looks.So,
success
cannot be measured in terms of
money
,as it is relative.
For instance
,for mountain climbers, climbing Mount Everest is a way to be successful whereas, for a student working hard and scoring a
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’ is successful.
Therefore
, it becomes difficult to measure
success
.
For example
,for a poor individual,a particular amount of
money
can make him feel successful as compared to a rich individual who won't be concerned at all with that particular amount of
money
. The majority of
people
feel proud when they achieve something that they aimed for,
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difficult to achieve or things
that
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not achieved by other
people
. My personal experience to achieve happiness is setting a short attainable goal on a weekly basis and
work
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toward achieving it.
Further
,
one
can
also
make
long term
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goals along with the short
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and work hard to achieve
it
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.As a saying goes,'Health is wealth',having a healthy life can direct a person to feel accomplishing
such
goals.A wealthy man can buy what he wants but he cannot buy health
by
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money
. To conclude,
nonetheless
, as
success
is relative, there
is
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a plethora of factors that can make an individual feel it.
However
,a specific factor can be accomplishing any ambitious task.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Affluence
  • Materialism
  • Fulfillment
  • Well-being
  • Philanthropy
  • Societal norms
  • Personal growth
  • Economic power
  • Subjective
  • Humanitarian
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