Young people are often influences by their behaviours and situations by other in the same age. This is called peer pressure. Do this disadvantage outweigh the advantages.

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their behaviours and situations. The main advantages are that adults learn a lot of experience from their good

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and as

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knowledge very quickly. The main demerits are that they fall into negative habits

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as smoking and drinking with their bad

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has many more advantages than drawbacks. On the one hand, there are many benefits of

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learn any knowledge and skills very rapidly, which helps them to learn other concepts more easily from their same-age

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the internet, it is easier for adults to solve any question in a

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with good

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and all are good at Mathematics

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during mathematics class hours.

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some demerits.

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, some adults have different negative attitudes and behaviours compared to others.

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a smoking habit which is bad for our health

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it affects negatively other

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affect badly other members of a

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. In conclusion,

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play a great role in

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to learn a lot of knowledge from them,

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some bad

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make others bad, but

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can be resolved by leaving those bad

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and making new

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has many more benefits than cons.