Young people are often influences by their behaviours and situations by other in the same age. This is called peer pressure. Do this disadvantage outweigh the advantages.

It is often argued that

teenagers

are

often

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affected by their

same

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peers

in order

to

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their behaviours and situations. The main advantages are that adults learn a lot of experience from their good

friends

and as

teenagers

, they acquire

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knowledge very quickly. The main demerits are that they fall into negative habits

such

as smoking and drinking with their bad

peers

. In my opinion, I think that

this

trend

has many more advantages than drawbacks. On the one hand, there are many benefits of

this

trend

. First and foremost,

teenagers

learn any knowledge and skills very rapidly, which helps them to learn other concepts more easily from their same-age

friends

.

Secondly

,

due to

the internet, it is easier for adults to solve any question in a

group

with good

friends

,

as a result

, it helps them to enhance their IT skills, which are high in demand in today's world.

For example

, I have 3

friends

and all are good at Mathematics

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for that reason, I strong my Mathematics from them,

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is because they always helped me with my weak

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during mathematics class hours.

On the other hand

, despite the benefits of

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also

some demerits.

Firstly

, some adults have different negative attitudes and behaviours compared to others.

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, if any boy in the

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a smoking habit which is bad for our health

then

it affects negatively other

peers

in the

group

, and they will

also

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to

this

bad habit later on.

Secondly

,

due to

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teenagers

have many

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things which

also

affect badly other members of a

group

. In conclusion,

peers

play a great role in

teenagers

'

life

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to learn a lot of knowledge from them,

while

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some bad

friends

make others bad, but

this

can be resolved by leaving those bad

friends

and making new

peers

.

However

, in my opinion,

this

trend

has many more benefits than cons.