Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, the preservation of wild animals is a subject that receives much attention from organizations around the world. Emerging from

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a contentious argument regarding whether it is justified to spend an

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amount of time and money on the conservation of animal

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funds should be used for the human race. In my opinion, it may be more advisable to side with the latter. On the one hand, there are several

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to the general consensus that it is necessary to protect wild animals despite

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amount of commitment and money required .

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of all, the conservation of fauna may be extremely beneficial for the ecosystem as well as

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civilizations.

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is due to the fact that if numerous animal

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were to die out, it would be detrimental to the diversity of the ecosystem, resulting in the death of many more fauna and flora

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producing a myriad of adversely impacts on nations' economy, society and industries.

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, it is evidenced that multiple

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activities,

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, dumping plethoras of industrial waste into the environment or releasing an excessive amount of carbon into the atmosphere, lead to the situation of many animal

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being on verge of extinction. As a consequence, it is the responsibility of

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to ameliorate the damages that have been dealt

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, opponents of the former view argue that a multitude of

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' predicaments may be still in need of concentration and funding in order to figure out remedies. One predicament that many people are suffering from is famine and hunger, as there are several areas around the world that have

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climate which is unsuitable for growing crops,

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residents of those mentioned places have to face a shortage of necessities, which can result in mass starvation. As

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, support from other people and countries is indispensable, which can range from donating food to those in need to coming up with methods to develop agriculture in unsuitable conditions.

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, the issue of natural calamities should not be overlooked due to the disastrous effects that can befall the life of countless people. It is essential for authorities, associations as well as individuals to commit both time and money to serve the purpose of minimizing damages when natural disasters occur. In conclusion, while there are several justifications for the emphasis on preserving fauna, it is my belief that human conditions should be more prioritized thanks to the myriad of hazardous issues that

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have to face.