Successful sport players can earn a great deal more money than people in other professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays famous and successful
sports
players
can easily have more income than other individuals with different skills. Some people feel that
this
is fully fair while
others
think
this
is not the real justice that they want. I am going to elaborate on both of these points of view and in the
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end I will give my own opinions with relevant examples. to start with, being successful leads to feeling all the hardships and whenever you come over all of them
that is
how you become a successful person.
Firstly
, if I was a very famous sportsman on earth I totally expect other to respect my effort and of ,course I should have my own wage in
this
way.
Secondly
, all the successful
sports
players
are all doing their athletics their whole life. To explicate it, Michael Phelps was one the most important swimmers in the United States and a successful sportsman, he started
this
sport from an early age and
this
means that he has no time to think about other things to do or work is why he had to make his income from the way that he doing his athletics.
Finally
, there are very rare people in the world that can have a good wage from their
sports
, mostly
sports
players
have a
second
job
besides
their sport.
On the other hand
, some individuals think
this
is unfair that
sports
players
earn a great deal more money than
others
.
For example
, teachers think that they are playing an important role in every single child in the world and they should earn more than the
others
.
In addition
, every solitary person in the world thinks that they should have more money than the
others
and
this
is logical as well. To sum up, in my opinion, in my ,opinion successful
sports
players
should earn more than the
others
.
Furthermore
, other individuals should put all their vigour to become successful as famous people worldwide.
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