Successful sport players can earn a great deal more money than people in other professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays famous and successful
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players
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can easily have more income than other individuals with different skills. Some people feel that
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is fully fair while
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think
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is not the real justice that they want. I am going to elaborate on both of these points of view and in the
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end I will give my own opinions with relevant examples. to start with, being successful leads to feeling all the hardships and whenever you come over all of them
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how you become a successful person.
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, if I was a very famous sportsman on earth I totally expect other to respect my effort and of ,course I should have my own wage in
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way.
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, all the successful
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players
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are all doing their athletics their whole life. To explicate it, Michael Phelps was one the most important swimmers in the United States and a successful sportsman, he started
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sport from an early age and
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means that he has no time to think about other things to do or work is why he had to make his income from the way that he doing his athletics.
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, there are very rare people in the world that can have a good wage from their
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, mostly
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players
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have a
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job
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their sport.
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, some individuals think
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is unfair that
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players
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earn a great deal more money than
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.
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, teachers think that they are playing an important role in every single child in the world and they should earn more than the
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.
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, every solitary person in the world thinks that they should have more money than the
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and
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is logical as well. To sum up, in my opinion, in my ,opinion successful
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players
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should earn more than the
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.
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, other individuals should put all their vigour to become successful as famous people worldwide.
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