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In some countries , more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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Gaining
information
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abouth
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about
 the houses and building where currently
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 live is becoming very popular in few nations. There are so many reasons behind
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 situation and a number of resources are available to find the background
history
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 of buildings or houses .
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 with, the two main reasons
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 receiving the
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 about the building or house are security and background
history
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 of theft or stolen
property
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. As security has become the major reason
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people
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 to protect themselves while living in
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 new area because
people
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 want to have more safety.
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,
background
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 check is
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to
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get the
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 of the area
that
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if the
property
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 was stolen or
anything
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if anything
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which
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was dangerous .
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, sometimes the buildings are owned/sold by other
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 and they live for so many years and suddenly the real owner might come to take possession of that building. So, checking the past
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 of
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the building
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building
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buildings
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 has become very important for
people
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.
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,
availability
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 of
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 resources can be taken from
police
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 or
people
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 living in the neighbour .
Police
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 always have the criminal
history
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 of the areas and they can search by filling the details of
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property
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the property
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 and these
records
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 can be beneficial for
people
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.
Moreover
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,
people
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 who live near that area can provide
the
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information
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 about the
theif
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thief
 threat and if there any dangerous activity happened. These ways might be helpful to gain
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history
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information
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 by asking
people
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 and requesting previous
history
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records
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 from
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police
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the police
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station
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stations
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. In conclusion, gathering
history
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records
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 of
building
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buildings
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 or
house
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houses
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 where
people
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 are living or
they
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apply
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are going to buy the
property
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 is very essential and they are interested to know in the detail ,whereas all the previous
records
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 or data can be found from
neighbors
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neighbours
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 or
police
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 station.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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