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In some countries , more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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Gaining
information
abouth
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about
 the houses and building where currently
people
 live is becoming very popular in few nations. There are so many reasons behind
this
 situation and a number of resources are available to find the background
history
 of buildings or houses .
To begin
 with, the two main reasons
of
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 receiving the
information
 about the building or house are security and background
history
 of theft or stolen
property
. As security has become the major reason
among
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people
 to protect themselves while living in
the
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 new area because
people
 want to have more safety.
Secondly
,
background
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 check is
must
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to
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get the
records
 of the area
that
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if the
property
 was stolen or
anything
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if anything
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which
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was dangerous .
For instance
, sometimes the buildings are owned/sold by other
people
 and they live for so many years and suddenly the real owner might come to take possession of that building. So, checking the past
records
 of
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building
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buildings
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 has become very important for
people
.
On the other hand
,
availability
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 of
information
 resources can be taken from
police
 or
people
 living in the neighbour .
Police
 always have the criminal
history
 of the areas and they can search by filling the details of
property
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 and these
records
 can be beneficial for
people
.
Moreover
,
people
 who live near that area can provide
the
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information
 about the
theif
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thief
 threat and if there any dangerous activity happened. These ways might be helpful to gain
the
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history
information
 by asking
people
 and requesting previous
history
records
 from
police
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the police
a police
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station
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stations
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. In conclusion, gathering
history
records
 of
building
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buildings
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 or
house
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houses
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 where
people
 are living or
they
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are going to buy the
property
 is very essential and they are interested to know in the detail ,whereas all the previous
records
 or data can be found from
neighbors
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neighbours
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 or
police
 station.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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