You are currently trying to improve your knowledge of a language which is not your first language. You have a friend who speaks this language fluently. You have decided to write to this friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • explain why you want to improve your knowledge of this language – • ask him/her for suggestions on how to learn more quickly • propose that you meet your friend to talk about it

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Dear Sam, I hope you and your family are in good spirits. I am really sorry I couldn't make it to your parents' anniversary

last

week owing to a few unrealistic deadlines at work. I am writing

this

letter to seek a few suggestions from you in order to learn french better since it is your

first

language. The reason for

this

is that I shall be travelling to France

this

year as an exchange student for a period of 6 months, having scored exceptionally well in my

second

(2) semester. Perhaps, I was wondering if you may recommend to me any book,

audio book

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audiobook

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, or online course, which may help me to brush up my french in a short span of time, considering that I am scheduled to kickstart my

third

(semester) in the following month. So, I hardly have any time on my hands. What's more, I think we should meet in person and discuss these things over a coffee at your favourite

restaurt

Correct your spelling

restaurant

, The Big Chill Cafe, on Thursday at 7:00 Pm. Do let me know of your plans. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Warm regards, Utsav Chandel

Submitted by utsavchandel26sep on Mon Aug 08 2022

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