You live near a public school. The school has asked residents to help with the maintenance of school buildings and play areas. Write a letter to the principal. In your letter explain why you would like to help tell them how you can help let them know when you are available.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am a father of your student studying 8th grade in your

school

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. I am writing to inform you about a support request for the conservation of

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premises. My son doing his studies in your education institution since his childhood as well as I was an old student of

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prestigious

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. Since there is a long relationship between me and the

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. I would like to take part in the maintenance activity of

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premises and the children's playground. I am good at painting and providing creative ideas. I can help you out with wonderful themes that can be painted on the wall as well as I will ask my neighbour to take part with us in improving playground amenities

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as fixing the basketball court and the football goal post.

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week, I have a busy schedule at my workplace which makes it difficult for me to participate, but I am available from 21/08/2022 to the 1st week of November. I will apply for leave with my manager and will work on it. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

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Faithfully, Jack

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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You live near a public school. The school has asked residents to help with the maintenance of school buildings and play areas. Write a letter to the principal. In your letter explain why you would like to help tell them how you can help let them know when you are available.

some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices to what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Most of the people in the society enjoy watching crime movies and criminal TV programmes. Why do you think people have more interest to watch them? What is the impact to the society due to this?

Logging of the rain forests is a serious problem and it may lead to the extiction of animal life and human life. Do you agree or disagree?

Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past 30 years in the world that many cities now are "one big traffic jam". Do you think that this statement is true? What measure can government take to address this problem?