You live near a public school. The school has asked residents to help with the maintenance of school buildings and play areas. Write a letter to the principal. In your letter explain why you would like to help tell them how you can help let them know when you are available.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am a father of your student studying 8th grade in your

school

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. I am writing to inform you about a support request for the conservation of

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premises. My son doing his studies in your education institution since his childhood as well as I was an old student of

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prestigious

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. Since there is a long relationship between me and the

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. I would like to take part in the maintenance activity of

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premises and the children's playground. I am good at painting and providing creative ideas. I can help you out with wonderful themes that can be painted on the wall as well as I will ask my neighbour to take part with us in improving playground amenities

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as fixing the basketball court and the football goal post.

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week, I have a busy schedule at my workplace which makes it difficult for me to participate, but I am available from 21/08/2022 to the 1st week of November. I will apply for leave with my manager and will work on it. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

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Faithfully, Jack

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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‘The best way to educate children is by using the Internet in every lesson.’ To what extent do you share this opinion? What other ways are there of making lessons effective for children?

Some people believe that countries should invite foreign companies to open their branches, offices and factories in order to develop their economies. Others think countries should invest in their own companies instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.