Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, higher education is critical for both

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and

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. Some people would argue that tertiary education should accept equal numbers of

students

in every subject.

Although

this

makes sense, as far as I am concerned, I

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disagree with

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statement as universities should ensure

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of

students

based

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their ability. To start with,

students

should be encouraged according to their ability. If undergraduates start a course that they are not captivated, it will result in

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.

This

is not beneficial for either the college, as well as, to the candidate.

For example

,

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research suggests that females are 40% more willing to study arts

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with

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males.

Thus

, it is paramount for universities that

students

choose the right

courses

for them,

Furthermore

, universities tend to inaccurately choose the candidates just to

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to fill all the positions up.

For instance

, the University of Rio de Janeiro

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proposed the equality of genre acceptance in 2004.

This

means that during

this

year, they granted

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equal quantity of men and women accepted in the

courses

.

As a result

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, the percentage of people who withdraw

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courses

were 60%, which was significantly higher than the same period in the previous year.

Therefore

, it is not beneficial to enrol

students

in the wrong subjects. In conclusion, from the statements presented below, it is inconceivable to believe that higher education should be based on equality of genre number enrolled in

courses

. Despite

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the fact that genre equality is of

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supreme importance, ensure that

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and men are

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to select the subjects by their talent and capability.