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Some people say that people should keep all their earnings and don't have to pay taxes to government. Do you agree or disagree with that statement.It is often

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Citizens have their own duty to pay tax on their salary which is a legal right and act under the law. It is often argued that some individuals commence that
people
 should not pay
taxes
 and keep all
money
 which they income from their passion. I strongly disagree with
this
 statement and think that it will create a difficult situation for the authority to maintain citizens and corruption along with black
money
 will rise and for that reason, the economy will be down dramatically. I will explain my reasons for it in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
 with, there are many critical difficult situations that will rise if
people
 do not pay
taxes
 on their earnings.
First
 and foremost, it creates a difficult situation for the authority to maintain the country's population,
this
 is because of the lack of
money
 it is not possible to supply food and other need to the poor citizens.
Secondly
, corruption will increase along with black
money
.
For example
, In 2017, India's black
money
 rose higher compared to past records and
this
 is because individuals are not paid the tax on their income.
Furthermore
, government funds will be less for not paying
taxes
 by
people
, and
as a result
, the government can not supply funds to Schools and other government organisations, which is bad for one nation.
Also
, if
people
 will not pay
taxes
 on their earnings
then
 the economy of the particular country will decrease dramatically, which affect negatively on that particular nation because every country mostly depends on their economy. In conclusion, after considering all, I think that the community must pay
taxes
 on their earnings because it helps to develop one nation and
also
 black
money
 along with corruption rate will decrease rapidly.
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