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You live near a public school. The school has asked residents to help with the maintenance of school buildings and play areas. Write a letter to the principal.

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Health is always a vital factor for
people
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 in
society
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. In recent days, employers are going to the office to complete important assignments for customers. Due to
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unknowingly spread the infections to others or make their health issues worse.
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 should avoid going to the office when they are sick for the safety of
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 and concentrate on their health to make it better. The safety of
society
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 stays with all of us. It is important for everyone to stay
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 the community when
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 not feeling well. It avoids
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spreading the virus to others.
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, I stay at a home and avoid physical meetings with my customers. It secures them from the virus as well as the business.
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, staying at a home helps employers to recover fast and resume their regular activities quickly.
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 is a group of
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 and individuals need to be aware of the protection of everyone.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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