Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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In recent days there is a growing trend among some individuals of trying alternatives to official medicine. While I understand the desire to use all means possible for a recovery, especially in cases of dome untreatable conditions, I am convinced that alternative treatments can endanger a person's life even more, and should be controlled by the state.
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of all, official medicines and treatment protocols were approved by many professionals after checking their compliance with important requirements as well as their effectiveness.
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, all of the doctors and medical staff in the hospitals are under thorough supervision and control. Whereas non-official pills or some new practices can have an unknown effect on some individuals or their health.
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, in my country at some period of time, it was very popular to go to "
molfars
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molars
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" with difficult deceases.
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, with the growing numbers of their clients, the number of sudden deaths
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grew, so the state interfered and passed a law that all of the
molfars
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molars
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should be licensed to practice and it had a positive effect.
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, when a person is in a fragile state and looking for a miracle, he or she can be an easy target for
frauds
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. So, there are many people ad organizations, whose alternative treatment has nothing to do with treating at all.
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, one of my mother's friends decided to go to a specialist in some specific medicine because her husband was dying from cancer.
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, the so-called specialist used her frustration to obtain thousands of dollars from her and
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disappeared into thin air. So in the end,
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woman was alone, because her husband died, and penniless. To sum up, the growing tendency of visiting alternative specialists
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of official doctors, as well as trying some unapproved pills etcetera, is hazardous.
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problem requires special attention from authorities, and,
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, some special regulations, because non-official practices can make a person's health even worse, or be a cover-up for some fraud schemes.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • alternative medicines
  • treatments
  • positive development
  • negative development
  • health problems
  • usual doctor
  • access
  • personalized approach
  • holistic well-being
  • lack of regulation
  • evidence-based research
  • proper medical treatment
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