These days, many university courses are offered through the internet. Some people think that online teaching has more advantages than conventional classroom teaching or lectures, while others claim that there are significant disadvantages. Do the benefits of online teaching outweigh the disadvantages?

There have been ongoing debates regarding whether or not some
university
curriculums should be taught in online classes. While doing so can be both negative and positive, I believe that there are more benefits than disadvantages.
To begin
with, there are various benefits associated with online teaching after high school levels.
Firstly
,
this
allows
students
to study at home to take less risk of having
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virus because lectures in
conventional
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classroom
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have to participate with many classmates during the pandemic.
Secondly
, another optimistic advantage is that
students
will not have confronted with traffic problems, as they can study at their home using their tablet or their computer. A number of scientific studies suggest that
university
crews who got opportunities to study online are more likely to reduce their stress and their anxiety from traffic congestion before
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class.
On the other hand
, some opponents of
this
idea might argue that allowing online lectures are not practical for some subjects
such
as chemistry.
This
is possibly because it believes that these subjects require experimental skills that can build up from real situations.
However
,
this
argument is simply invalid, given that numerous studies have proven that many
university
students
in Thailand ,
for example
, cannot access the laboratory equipment due to not enough. In fact,
this
also
revealed that the
university
's organization should encourage and balance
students
' schedules between online classes and reality classrooms. In conclusion,
although
some are concerned that teaching online in universities might contribute to missing real practices,
this
essay demonstrated that its advantages outweigh its potential detrimental outcomes.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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