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Although there are a lot of translation software available, learning a language could still be advantageous. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In the times of Artificial Intelligence, a lot of human skills could be replaced by a small computer or smartphone program, meanwhile,
translation
 isn't an exception to
this
 trend. But, does it remain still useful and important to learn foreign languages? Without any doubt, I would answer "Yes!" to
this
 question, and in
this
 essay, I would explain my point of view that learning a
language
 is still to be beneficial for everybody.
First
 of all, as of today, mankind didn't already achieve the level of Artificial Intelligence, which is needed for perfect
translation
 software. Unless there are a plethora of
translation
 programs, any of them is on the same
language
 level as a native speaker. Even if it is possible to use
translation
 websites in domestic situations, it isn't possible to do serious work without a human professional translator.
For instance
, if you would check some headhunter internet sites, you would be astonishing, at how popular is the job of a translator. Another significant reason for learning a foreign
language
 is own development because human brains need weekly training to stay fit. As soon as people terminate the learning process in their life, their ability to think and
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 productivity of it rapidly decreases. The ideal example of it,
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 training courses for elderly people for avoiding brain diseases, where all of them have to learn new languages or the basics of Mathematik. But,
in contrast
 to scientific subjects, learning a
language
 is more interesting. In conclusion, I absolutely agree with the point of view that learning foreign languages is still advantageous, even if some new
translation
 methods were found.
Although
 it is sometimes difficult to find free time for it and
also
 stressful to spend evenings doing homework, by finishing
this
 process almost everybody, who has done that, is happy about
this
 choice.
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