Today some people have to work away from their family. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
Nowadays, a significant number of people
are migrate
to find a job in other nations and Change the verb form
are migrating
being
away from their parents, children and spouse. While there are many benefits to working in different countries, there are Wrong verb form
be
also
some drawbacks to consider.
On the one hand, many believe that the benefits from the mentioned reason cannot be ignored. To begin
with, due to economic problems the poor people or some, which do not have a suitable job and couldn't find one for themselves may looking
for it in Change the verb form
look
be looking
another cities
. Replace the adjective
another city
other cities
That is
to say, they might be suffering from financial issues and to get rid of it
they should be living Correct pronoun usage
them
in
Change preposition
apply
far
distance from their family. Add an article
the far
For instance
, when you look you
, it can be seen that many Afghanish Change preposition
at you
worker
are working in Iran far from their families. Change to a plural noun
workers
Moreover
, when they want to progress, this
reason is great
chance for them. Add an article
a great
This
in turn probable has a positive impact on their lifestyle,
and affects their Remove the comma
apply
children
futures.
Change noun form
children's
On the other hand
, others argue that this
action will have irreparable consequences. The main reason justifying their belief is that being with family cannot be replaced by anything. In other words
, labours who are far from their province in some cases they
may feel Correct pronoun usage
apply
loneliness
and homeless. More specifically, Replace the word
lonely
this
change in their life leads to depression and other mental illnesses in them. A good example of this
is children that are living without their parents and their supporter might feel emptiness in their lives and face more serious problems in the future. Furthermore
, the one who decide
to migrate should be aware of its both profits and harms. For many, the only positive point Change the verb form
decides
from
Change preposition
of
this
act is living in Correct your spelling
wealthy
welthy
Correct your spelling
wealthy
condition
.
To sum up, it really depends on Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
people
situation to decide Change noun form
people's
living
far from their family with Change the verb form
to live
high
income, or with them but in hard Correct article usage
a high
condition
. So, both sides of the story must be considered. Progress in life always requires hard work.Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
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