Some children receive almost no encouragement from their parents regarding their performance at school while other children receive too much pressure from their over enthusiastic parents which can have a negative impact on the child. Why do you think some parents put too much pressure on their children to perform well at school? What do you think a role of a parent should be in their child education. Write at least 250 words

Some
kids
get almost no cheering from their
parents
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with
with the
respect to their academic achievement at
school
,while other youngsters get a lot of compulsion from their exuberant
parents
which can affect the child negatively. I believe
parents
force their
children
to achieve academic excellence because
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high
reputation
of some
parents
in society and some
parents
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their
kids
to be like them.I
also
suggest the duty of
parents
in
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the ward's
education are to offer support and to read together.I will elaborate more on
this
in my essay.
To begin
with,Some
parents
with high society recognization impose a lot of educational content on their
kids
such
that,they begin to force the child to study all
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of books to become
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scorer
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.
This
is because they don’t want their
reputation
to be tarnished.They
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therefore
go to the extreme to see to it that
theirward's
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their ward's
their wards
performance at
school
is always high.
Additionally
,Some
parent
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parents
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want their
children
to be like them in terms of academics and these
parents
uplift their
kids
with coercion,in order to achieve exactly what they achieved when they were in
school
. Research conducted by the Ghana education service shows that about 60% of
kids
who perform well in
school
but are not cheerful are due to parental influence.
This
is a result of their own selfishness to secure their
reputation
.
Furthermore
,I believe
parents
have a lot of responsibilities to play in the academic life of their
kids
such
as offering support to their
children
.
This
increases their confidence level in every aspect of their life.Providing support to
kids
even if they perform poorly at
school
encourages them to do better
next
time.Again,
parents
should read together with their
Children
by doing assignments with them,Visiting the library together and solving examination questions together.
This
Will inculcate the energy of learning in the child thereby improving his or her study abilities.
For instance
,My Junior brother who was academically down improved his academic scores when my Mother supported him by encouraging him and studying with him with the least chance she got. In conclusion,In my opinion,I think
parent
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force on their kid's performance at
school
because they want to sustain their
reputation
in the community,and some
also
want their
kids
to achieve exactly what they achieved academically.
However
,I
also
believe parental roles
such
as supporting your wards as well as learning with them should be imputed in their child’s education.
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