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some people believe that after the child begins his/her schooling their teacher will have more influence than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, Education is very crucial in everybody's life. Some communities argue that children will be more influenced by their
faculty
 rather than their
parents
.
This
 essay describes both sides of the given statement. On the one side, In
this
 competitive world, the heir is spending
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the
a
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most day in
school
 to achieve their goals. And the academy era is more compared to home day. In
this
 ,way
their
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 is getting more influenced by their
faculty
 compared to their
parents
. Due to
parents
,
schedule
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the schedule
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 they
also
 provide tuition to their offspring after
school
.
This
 reason engenders to spend lack of era with their offspring.
For instance
, a child will go to
school
 and spend 10 hours per day in the
school
 itself. Afterwards, his/her
parents
 will send him/her to tuition. In
this
 ,way offspring have more influenced by
faculty
 rather than their
parents
. On the other side, offspring are influenced by their
parents
 and
faculty
 depends on their parent's behaviour. Even if offspring spend less time with their
parents
 they will care for their
parents
 more and listen to their words. To sum up, I agree with the given statement that offspring are influenced more by their teachers rather than their
parents
. To build their standards offspring are spending more time in
academy
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the academy
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 with their teachers.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • influence
  • academic performance
  • character
  • values
  • upbringing
  • personality
  • education
  • guidance
  • collaboration
  • nurturing
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