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Adults do less exercise nowadays. Some think that people can be encouraged to live healthy lives through sporting events such as the Olympics or the World Cup. Others think that there are better ways to encourage adults to exercise. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

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People
 have no more
activities
 in their normal life than past at the present.Especially mature
people
 almost do nothing in their daily routine. There are numerous reasons lead to
people
 do less physical movement
such
 as spending
a
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long
hours
 watching
TVs
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 and on the internet, long working
hours
 in the offices and using private cars and public transportation to go to the job and for other purposes.
Although
 some sportive
activities
 are arranged to incent
people
 to do more exercises, there is another method to force
people
 to do more. Watching TVs and long distances using the internet ban
people
's actions. Adults spend more time watching movies and other programs and use the internet to communicate with other
people
 online. These habits limit adults' movement and influence their physical and mental health. When
people
 watch TV, they consume more fast foods and snacks. Poor diet leads to obesity. The long working
hours
 in the job field is another obstacle to banning physical
activities
. Working a long day in the office has a negative impact on health.
Moreover
, using cars and public transportation
also
 limit movement. Despite the set tournaments like Olympics and world cups to encourage
people
 to do more sporting
activities
 , education is the best way to force
people
 to do exercise. Matures inspire them to do more
activities
, while they are watching sportive events.
However
, these organisations have limited effects on
people
's attitudes.I strongly believe that educated
people
 do more sports
activities
 and spent
hours
 doing exercise. Educated adults are able to do more
activities
 than others. İn conclusion,
people
 struggle with many problems in their life and their movements are banned.
Nevertheless
, sportive organisations and true education force
people
 to do more exercise.
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