With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even threatened to the point of extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measures can be taken to deal with this problem?

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In recent times, multiple species lose their natural habitats and are becoming more endangered due to multiple factors
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as urban development, deforestation and illegal hunting. These phenomenons impact negatively nature's balance in the long term. In my opinion, I believe that it is crucial to protect these creatures in all coats. Why is it important to do so and what solutions can be done to stop
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problem or minimize its damages ? Forests and jungles contain an important amount of wild species that survive through the laws of nature. It is well known that humans should not interact with
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balance but, unfortunately, they keep damaging it by cutting off trees to expand cities and increasing the industrial production of wood. Many animals,
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as Koalas and Kangaroos, lose their habitats and
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are more prone to extinction.
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, illegal hunting of endangered species, for touristic reasons
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,
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contributes to
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problem and
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should be stopped. So what measures can be taken to deal with
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problem ? The government should create strict rules to preserve these rare creatures as much as possible and
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spend a reasonable budget on their protection. Setting fire in forests or hunting,
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, should be punished by the law.
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, zoos and tourist areas exploiting wild aminals, like elephants or giraffes ,
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, should be banned and closed. To summarize, everyone should contribute to the protection of these innocent and wild creatures. By doing so we are
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preserving balance and laws of nature.
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