Extreme sport such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In recent years,extreme

sports

have become popular around the world.Some people argued that those

sports

are supposed to be prohibited since they might put people’s lives in danger.As for me,

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totally disagree with

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point. On the one hand, Doing extreme

sports

sometimes increase the risk of

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individuals

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injuries or even death.

For instance

, In China,particularly during winter, there have been many

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that getting injuries regarding leg or spine fractures by skiing.According to data , the casualties are even more than 100 per year. So someone thought that

forbiding

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forbidding

this

kind of activities may reduce the occurrence of

such

things.

On the other hand

,

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believe

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that it’s not as dangerous as people think. In fact, The danger brought by these

sports

can be reduced by taking some steps.

For example

, nowadays, there are many regulations as well as training for players to learn and undergo so that they can save their own life in the case of

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. And when they exercise , there will be

also

a coach or trainer to teach them how to protect

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themselves

themslves

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themselves

which will decrease the possibility of being wounded.

Furthermore

, the proliferation of protective

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,

such

as helmets or particular

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that

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made

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of rare materials ,

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participants with minimum fatal situations.

Therefore

, players can enjoy those activities in a relatively safe condition and don’t need to be afraid of them. In conclusion, in my opinion, even though extreme

sports

sometimes have a

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negative

negetive

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negative

impact on human lives or even cause death by accidents, actually all

sports

have risks.As long as people be prepared in advance, the danger can be prevented.