Extreme sport such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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In recent years,extreme
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have become popular around the world.Some people argued that those
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are supposed to be prohibited since they might put people’s lives in danger.As for me,
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totally disagree with
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point. On the one hand, Doing extreme
sports
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sometimes increase the risk of
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individuals
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injuries or even death.
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, In China,particularly during winter, there have been many
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that getting injuries regarding leg or spine fractures by skiing.According to data , the casualties are even more than 100 per year. So someone thought that
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forbidding
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kind of activities may reduce the occurrence of
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things.
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,
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that it’s not as dangerous as people think. In fact, The danger brought by these
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can be reduced by taking some steps.
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, nowadays, there are many regulations as well as training for players to learn and undergo so that they can save their own life in the case of
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. And when they exercise , there will be
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a coach or trainer to teach them how to protect
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themselves
themslves
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themselves
which will decrease the possibility of being wounded.
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, the proliferation of protective
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,
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as helmets or particular
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of rare materials ,
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participants with minimum fatal situations.
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, players can enjoy those activities in a relatively safe condition and don’t need to be afraid of them. In conclusion, in my opinion, even though extreme
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sometimes have a
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negative
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negative
impact on human lives or even cause death by accidents, actually all
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have risks.As long as people be prepared in advance, the danger can be prevented.
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