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Some people prefer to have a job that requires a good deal of travelling, while others prefer a sedentary job. Why? What other factors should be considered while selecting a job?

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 contemporary world, everyone wants to do a good standard career and earn more so that they can afford a good life. The
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 can require travelling abroad or within the country to different destinations or the human can pursue a
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 from home and office alone. In my opinion ,
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 working from the office or home gives a person ample time for his family and little stress , travelling extensively exposes them to diverse ideas, and concepts and builds a global tourism experience. On one hand ,remote working or working from the office provides
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 individual with ample time as he works for a specified shift .
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, the individual can help o in household work and can play with his children.
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, he can
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 attend important meetings at his convenience despite the fact he is not at the workplace .
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, during the Corona pandemic when everything comes to a halt offices kept themselves updated through zoom meetings, Skype or the Internet.
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 ,travelling for a profession gets a human acquainted with new networks, cultures ,people and geography ,
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 he becomes familiarised with new technologies and advancements. ,
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 he can visit famous places over there and
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 gets some practical ideas of new strategies of the business.
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 whether the
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 requires travelling or working from premises, brand value and work culture of the place plays a very important part when considering a
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 . Everyone prefers to work in a multinational company with a high brand image so that the exposure and experience of the person are enhanced.
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 a good team ,motivating leadership focussed goals and values ,rewards , and recognition at few of the policies of the company seen by the
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 seekers. In conclusion, travelling for business or
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 generates new ideas whereas sedentary jobs are
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 beneficial as maximum time can be devoted to family.
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, factors
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 as the popularity of the brand and workplace culture are some other factors to be looked upon while searching for a
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