You are a parent and you need information about a school trip your child is going on. Write a letter to the class teacher. In your letter • introduce yourself • explain what information you are looking for • inform the teacher about any specific needs your child has

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Dear Teacher, I am writing

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letter with regard to a school trip which is going to happen during the

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week of July.Being a parent I would like to introduce myself and I am working with the ABC bank at the main branch. As you know, the trip will be almost five days,

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I would like to know the complete schedule right from day one until the

last

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day of the trip.

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, we

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need budget-related information as well despite the entire amount will be on school.

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, I would like to contribute a little amount on behalf of my kid. Undoubtedly, I strongly recommended having a basic medication kit along with a few vegan food items in the bag as my kid needs to have them very frequently due to water pollution in our area.

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, they may require to have glasses as they are going to see mind-blowing sceneries and breathtaking places. I look forward to seeing them with great joy and I am sure that every child will be over the moon with the great experience. Best regards, Lakshmi.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

186 words

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You are a parent and you need information about a school trip your child is going on. Write a letter to the class teacher. In your letter • introduce yourself • explain what information you are looking for • inform the teacher about any specific needs your child has

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Tests and examinations are a central feature of school systems in many countries. Do you thinnk the educational benefits of testing outway any disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

discuss both view and give your opinion .student should be allowed to chose any course they like others says otherwise

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More and more people are using computers and electric devices to access information, therefore there is no need for printed books, magazines and newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (Technology)

Some regard it is important to keep and maintain old buildings rather than replacing them with modern buildings? To what extent do you agree or disagree, express your opinion?