Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter •explain the reasons for the noise •apologise •describe what action you will take

Dear Mr Smith, I received your letter yesterday in which you complained about the inconvenience you had due to the noise that came from our side. Honestly, I really regret
this
irresponsible behaviour of ours and apologize for the ordeal you face due to us. Actually, I am busy renovating my place nowadays and the noise you hear is from the machinery the workers use to drill and cut the objects as the flooring of my house is going on.
Moreover
, the doors of my house are
also
not fixed to the hinges yet due to which the sound effects are not muffled and coming out loud. Soon the roof of my house will be mended and the gadget work will finish. As of today, I will
also
fix my doors and I too am making my doors and walls soundproof by covering them with special sheets. I really hope that my explanation and actions will help lessen your difficulty. Yours sincerely, Sidra Ain Ali.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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