Some scientist think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and message should be sent to contact them. Other scientist think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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and powers by the
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are
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of the
opinion
that there are intelligent
life
forms in
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of the world and a letter must be sent to get in touch with them. Few
analyst
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are against the
opinion
and thought it will be disastrous.
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essay will talk about both
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.
To begin
, many
researcher
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want
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to venture into a new dimension to make
life
easier for individual,
this
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bring
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about the suggestion of
knowledge
from
other
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world. The quest for
a
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new development will benefit
individual
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individuals
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and might make
life
easier.
Moreover
, before the invention of
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washing machine,
to wash
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as
being
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a difficult task
,
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after
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the advent washing become
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easier,
this
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might be the thought of the
researcher
to invent another machine with the help of other
knowledge
. On the
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other hand
otherhand
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other hand
,
this
adventure might
brought
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a great risk to individuals, communities and the nation at large.
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Forbes magazine like two weeks ago report the incident of a failed electric circuit which was just launched
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a month ago. The adverse effect of
this
might make the other
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to
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think it will be disastrous to seek
for
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knowledge
in
other
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world.
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it might put
there
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life
in danger and might lead to an
outvreak
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outbreak
of disease. In conclusion, it is important to venture into another development to make
life
more flexible and easier, considering the effect, in my
opinion
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I think the quest for
knowledge
should be minimal to avoid a bad outcome.
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