Some scientist think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and message should be sent to contact them. Other scientist think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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of the world and a letter must be sent to get in touch with them. Few

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

266 words

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Some scientist think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and message should be sent to contact them. Other scientist think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Your opinion

Banking and payment methods. The role of banks in the modern world. Large banks and their work. Working with clients.

The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.