Some scientist think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and message should be sent to contact them. Other scientist think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The quest for
knowledge
and powers by the researcher
bring in many ideas and assumption, many researcher
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researchers
are
of the Change the verb form
is
opinion
that there are intelligent life
forms in other part
of the world and a letter must be sent to get in touch with them. Few Change the wording
another part
other parts
analyst
are against the Change to a plural noun
analysts
opinion
and thought it will be disastrous. This
essay will talk about both opinion
.
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opinions
To begin
, many researcher
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researchers
want
to venture into a new dimension to make Change the verb form
wants
life
easier for individual, this
in-turn
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in turn
bring
about the suggestion of Change the verb form
brings
knowledge
from other
world. The quest for Change the wording
another
a
new development will benefit Remove the article
apply
individual
and might make Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
life
easier. Moreover
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washing machine, Change the article
the
to wash
as Change the verb form
washing
being
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apply
,
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after
the advent washing become Correct word choice
but after
more
easier, Change the word
apply
this
might be the thought of the Correct word choice
and this
researcher
to invent another machine with the help of other knowledge
.
On the Correct your spelling
other hand
otherhand
, Correct your spelling
other hand
this
adventure might brought
a great risk to individuals, communities and the nation at large. Change the verb form
bring
be brought
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according to
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like
a month ago. The adverse effect of Change preposition
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this
might make the other researcher
to
think it will be disastrous to seek Change the verb form
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for
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knowledge
in other
world. Change the wording
another
Moreover
it might put Add a comma
,Moreover
there
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their
life
in danger and might lead to an outvreak
of disease.
In conclusion, it is important to venture into another development to make Correct your spelling
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life
more flexible and easier, considering the effect, in my opinion
I think the quest for Add a comma
,opinion
knowledge
should be minimal to avoid a bad outcome.Submitted by adedayoadesewa1 on
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Your opinion
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Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
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