You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell him which team won describe the conditions on the day say how you felt about the match

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Hi Davide, How are you? I was planning to come and see you in the hospital, but your parents insisted that you need more time to recover. Anyway, I have some great news for you about the latest

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. We played with the Red Stars, they are from Montreal

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if I am not mistaken. The team is quite experienced, they have a few former professional players. To be honest with you, I still can not believe it, but we won. They knew, that you are off

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why they decided to play with high pressure. If you had not advised us to make the change in the scheme, it would not have been possible to resist long. We decided to go all in defence and it worked. Well, the

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was extremely tough. They scored

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, but we managed to stage a comeback at the very end of the match. It was hilarious, I will never forget it. I think they wasted too much energy at the beginning of the

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, so we managed to pull ourselves together and scored two times! By the way, we have already started preparing for the

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, so we need to discuss a plan for it. Hope they will allow me to visit you in person on Friday. Take care, Artem.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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