You have received a letter from your neighbour complaining about noise from your house/flat. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter explain the cause of the noise apologise for the noise describe what action you will take to solve the problem Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ………………. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Dear Mr Brown, I am writing
this
letter in response to your previous letter which I received yesterday, complaining regarding the unpleasant voice from my apartment. Actually, there is reconstruction going on at my residence. As you know, the rainy season is going on and my roof is leaking when there is rain. In order to fix
this
issue, the workers are using the machines.
Thus
, the noise is coming from there. I apologise for the depth of my heart as I did not realise that it would cause too much inconvenience to you. I admit that the noise is extremely irritating which ultimately cause headache since you are living
next
door. You might be suffering from the same problem.
Although
the work can not stop yet, still I have a solution to
this
. I would ask the contractor to hire more workers so that the work would be done in the
next
two days. The more workers, the less time it would take to complete reconstruction. I am sorry once again. Your's sincerely, Ammy Sandhu
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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