Some people say that advertisement is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discus both views and give your opinion.

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It is argued that advertisement is whether successful or
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tool in terms of making costumers
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buy the product .In
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essay, I will discuss both views and give my point of view that advertisement is not needed stuff.
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,in some
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mostly when people try it for the
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time advertising may play the key role in
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choice as it has no idea in a particular area , and in loads of occasions the trustworthy product will be chosen , and passively or actively listened and recommended product has absolutely more odds to be prefered .
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, there is
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quote where the famous marketer said (Great
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do not require any advertising).
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most used
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,
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as Aspirine , never needed using advertisement to sell them more,but all expensive alternatives that eliminate
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in the same way as traditional aspirin does but from other company ,uses all TV,Radio,Billboard pursuing us to buy their commodity . To conclude , I would say that
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in some cases of life it can be detrimental, the majority of the
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are already purchased without any advertising .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuading
  • awareness
  • incentives
  • consumers
  • psychology
  • behavioral science
  • emotional appeals
  • brand association
  • loyalty
  • over-saturation
  • ad-blockers
  • desensitized
  • impact
  • digital media
  • personal recommendations
  • peer recommendations
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